We all know how large our planet is and compared to outer space, it's very tiny. Scientists can discover things in space millions of light years away but can't map out our very own ocean. It is said that we only have explored about 5% of our oceans. That leaves 95% undiscovered which is a huge chunk in our deep seas. I can't come to the conclusion of why we can't find out more of the ocean, but yet we are in the vast space and time continuum uncovering the unknown.
Our seas has been deadly with it's 352 quintillion gallons of water and with only 1/20 of it being discovered (5% / 100%) it's hard to say what we have hidden in the ocean. With all of the marine life discovered already, there is so much more that we can learn. Species that have been unveiled or even species that have became knowingly extinct can be hidden under the gallons of water that is essential to it's life. Marine- biology has covered a lot of our marine life but it's ridiculous how much more there is.
Comparing our discoveries from the ocean to space is one that is heavily disputed. Many say that it's harder to find what's in the ocean because of the dangers the come along with it and for space, it's just the fact that you need money to go travel into the black sky. We know much more of space compared to Earth and it goes to show how big Earth really is even if it's a tiny dot in the galaxy.
Trinhzzzzz--You have some good points and ideas in your new entries, and your development of them is improving. Keep working at creating significance. You have some good visual support. Don't forget about rhetoric. Your reader doesn't know you have an assignment, so they need context, lead it and closing. Also, you have some great tone and style at times, but you don't often maintain it through your entry. For example, Entry 5. Awesome title. Full of tone and style. But then, the entry doesn't follow through. You go into the entry and just write a response. Keep your style into your writing as well.
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